At the moment Room 12 has been practicing using writing to show the reader not tell. We had a total of 30 minutes to write a page long, detailed piece of writing about a best day ever, or a argument. Room 12 went all the stages of writing with out even the teacher instructing us! Above is Mitchell and Quinn Shaw having a conference about their recounts. We conferenced so we could share a readers of view of the other persons writing. Then we proof-read our writing so there were mistakes.
By Phoenix and Toby